The exhaust earth groaned and quivered under a glave of the sun.Spirales in heat rose from the ground on if from molten larva.The panting lizard crawl painfully over the hot rock on search of the shady crevics.Cattle or dogs crinched under the shade. (please help me to edit this .I have done it with my ideas,but not confidant.)

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2015-07-03T15:22:30+05:30
Some wrong words were used but i corrected them

The exhaust earth groaned and quivered under a glare of the sun.spirals in heat rose from the ground on if from molten lavaThe panting lizard crawl painfully over the hot rock in search of the shady crevices. Cattle or dogs crunched under the shade.

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