Primary School English13 points
PLEASE!!! help me end this story in a different way..... once there was an old carpenter who was about to retire and decided to spend the rest of his life with his family.The employer-contractor was sad to see his good worker retire.He went to the carpenter and asked him to build a house as personal favour before retirement.The carpenter agreed.But over time,it was easy to see that is heart was not in his work,used inferior materials and resorted to shoddy workmanship.It was an unfortunate way to end a dedicated career.When his employer came to inspect the house,he handed the front-key and said,"this is your house.....my gift to you". What a shame! if he had only known he's building his own house,he would have done it differently....
NOW PLEASE GIVE A DIFFERENT ENDING TO IT....BUT NOT WITH AN ENDING THAT HAS THE CARPENTER OBEDIENT AND DID HIS FINAL HOUSE WITH DEDICATION.
Please make sure that the story still has the carpenter,the employer-contractor,and the agreement of building the house...............please urgent