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2015-09-13T21:26:34+05:30
There was a swimming competition in our school.I know that the water was cold.I scared for sometime.then my teacher advises me and I got confidence.I took a deep breath and jumped and wonit
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2015-09-15T20:14:53+05:30
The water was cold. I took a deep breath and jumped. I was literally shivering. I got goosebumps all over my body. suddenly I felt that my body had become still. I couldn't swim. I started moving downwards. I couldn't breathe properly. my body was getting numb. then I could feel something pulling my legs. I got so scared that I was about eat me heart. the pull was getting harder and harder and then suddenly I screamed. then I saw that I was actually on my bed and it was my li'l sister who was trying to wake me up. I heaved a sigh of relief. I closed my eyes and thanked God several times for not making that incident a real one. It was one of the tragic moments of my life.
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rather than the line 'I was actually on my bed' u can write "I realised that I was actually on my bed dreaming that entire thing."