I had never experienced such a wonderful day. i often wonder that day when i was only 4 shall never end . i saw  marvelous creatures and weather i had never  seen . rain that i saw was like magic. i never had ever encountered something so beautiful before . the joy that ran through me like thunder which i just heard . it was the best day of my life until now that i recall it and am filled with hapiness like never before. you should  emphasise on like never before a lot and add the beauty of animals that danced like pecocks i am running out of time so cant write more .
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